swissmarg: Mrs Hudson (Molly)
[personal profile] swissmarg
Title: The Baker Street Nativity Advent Calendar (6/24)
Author: swissmarg
Prompter: [livejournal.com profile] rifleman_s, who wanted to see 'What happened at the cinema'
Rating: G
Word count: Every installment has 221 words (on my computer)
Characters: John/Sherlock
Timeline: Following on the end of chapter 20
Disclaimer: This is a transformative work inspired by the BBC television series Sherlock, created by Mark Gatiss and Steven Moffat, and the 2009 movie Nativity! from Mirrorball Films.
Summary: This is a series of 221b drabbles set in and around The Baker Street Nativity and will make very little sense without having read that first. These drabbles may also contain spoilers for the main story. They are not posted in any particular order, and will jump around in time. I will try to give you some idea of where each drabble fits within (or before or after) the main story in the 'Timeline' field in the header. This series has not been beta read.

Six: At the Cinema

This had been a bad idea. John couldn't follow the movie at all. He was hyper-aware of Sherlock fidgeting in the seat next to him, trying to find a comfortable position for his long limbs. Every so often, his elbow or knee would bump John's. John could have moved away, but the more Sherlock squirmed, the more John held firm. It was becoming something of a game of chicken. John would have said Sherlock was bored with the movie, but every time he snuck a sideways glance, Sherlock's eyes were glued to the screen with an expression of intense concentration.

It wasn't just the current distractions that bothered John, though. It was that he had absolutely no idea what Sherlock's intentions were. They'd gone out a few times, snogged, had fantastic sex, and John had fallen in head over bollocks, only to find out that Sherlock had quite possibly been playing him the whole time, just as he'd played the school governors, the mayor - hell, the entire bloody city. John swore he was going to back off until he got his head clear, but then he went and gave Sherlock the song, and Sherlock reciprocated the gesture, and now he was on his best way to falling back down the same hole. This time, he had only himself to blame.

Date: 2013-12-06 08:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] frodosweetstuff.livejournal.com
Eeepe, this was painful to read, even if we know that John's perception of Sherlock's feelings is wrong and that the happy end isn't too far off. - But it was also very excellent because I often think that we all tend to forget that actually being someone close to Sherlock can't be easy and understanding his motives and feelings must be terribly difficult when you don't have an omniscient narrator to let you look inside Sherlock's head. So even more kudos for John for not giving up. :D

Thank you!

Date: 2013-12-06 08:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] frodosweetstuff.livejournal.com
Yes, and I think that's the big attraction of this pairing - that sense that they do make each other better people. :))))))

And I think this comment is again longer than the drabble, haha!
So when the advent calendar is done you'll do a daily essay series on your interpretation of Sherlock and John from Christmas Day until Twelfth Night... :DDDDDDD

(Seriously, wouldn't that be cool?)

Date: 2013-12-06 02:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kitmerlot1213.livejournal.com
Getting John's thoughts on these chapters goes a long way to understanding just how lucky we are that they got out of their way long enough to actually get together :)

Date: 2013-12-06 03:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rifleman-s.livejournal.com
Oh thank you so much for this! (And although you couldn't know it, being tall with long legs myself, I can absolutely understand Sherlock squirming trying to get comfortable!!)

"It wasn't just the current distractions that bothered John, though. It was that he had absolutely no idea what Sherlock's intentions were."

Poor John, though - this was one of those awfully confusing moments for him. In some ways, it seemed as if he was trying to see if he could get Sherlock into a "mundane" sort of 'dating' situation (the sort of thing 'normal' couples do), but it seems now that he's even more perplexed . . .

It was a great scene, though. Thanks again.

Date: 2013-12-07 01:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mildred-bobbin.livejournal.com
oh my heart! gorgeous romantic tension, what a lovely insight into John's pov.

Profile

swissmarg: Mrs Hudson (Default)
swissmarg

January 2020

S M T W T F S
    1234
567891011
12131415161718
19202122232425
262728293031 

Most Popular Tags

Style Credit

Expand Cut Tags

No cut tags
Page generated Jun. 3rd, 2025 01:28 pm
Powered by Dreamwidth Studios
OSZAR »